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This is my acrostic poem about Maia Poroaki. My mum and I watched the story that Miss Moat read. We wrote down parts of the story and then we typed it into my chrome book. I hope you like it.
Ollie this is a great poem that shares lots of information about Maia Poroaki! You should be super proud of yourself. I also like how you have included the information in your blog on how you completed this task. I wonder what you found easy and what you found difficult?
Please note that some of the writing is hard to read - the blue text clashes with the red background and makes it very blurry. How do you think your could fix it so that it is easier to read?
Hi Ollie, Yes, I certainly did like your acrostic poem, and what a great idea to make some notes while Miss Moat was reading the story. That would have made it easier to write your poem.
Awsome ollie. I like how you did't use the same words over and over again. Next time try to check your spelling.
ReplyDeleteOllie this is a great poem that shares lots of information about Maia Poroaki! You should be super proud of yourself. I also like how you have included the information in your blog on how you completed this task. I wonder what you found easy and what you found difficult?
ReplyDeletePlease note that some of the writing is hard to read - the blue text clashes with the red background and makes it very blurry. How do you think your could fix it so that it is easier to read?
Hi Ollie,
ReplyDeleteYes, I certainly did like your acrostic poem, and what a great idea to make some notes while Miss Moat was reading the story. That would have made it easier to write your poem.