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Tuesday, August 24, 2021

My Hawaiki

I love going to my hawaiki

3 comments:

  1. Wow! Ollie this piece of writing is fabulous! I love the details that you have included as it paints a picture in my head of a lovely, relaxing, special place.
    In your blog post can you please include what you found easy and what you found challenging in your writing.
    Keep up the awesome effort Ollie!

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  2. Awesome Ollie! What lovely descriptive language you have used! You have expanded on your ideas giving me more information. I really enjoyed reading it and especially about the book case of course! What is your favourite book at the moment in lockdown?

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  3. Hi Ollie,
    What a wonderful piece of writing, and with so much description and person voice. I really enjoyed reading this, well done Ollie.
    Hope you are enjoying lockdown with your family.

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